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Don't Whitewash History -- by Mysti Parker

Don’t Whitewash History

by Mysti Parker

Originally posted on Four Foxes One Hound

When I first began writing A Time for Everything back in 2010, I also enrolled in a writing class at Gotham Writers Workshop. This was my first attempt at a historical romance. I had waded into uncharted waters and had yet to commit myself to the amount of research needed for this story.

The framework of the plot was there and strong enough to build upon. Confederate widow meets Union veteran after the Civil War and both must overcome differences and social hurdles in order to fall in love. Supporting characters included African Americans as both former slaves and those who had always been free. Our villain was a former slave owner. The characters, I thought, were solid enough to turn into memorable personalities. So I decided to use parts of the draft in this class to see what I could improve upon.

The class was too expensive, but at least I learned a few things. To this day, I remember one important piece of feedback from a classmate: “Don’t whitewash history.”

I couldn’t wrap my head around why he would say that. I’d avoided the use of racial slurs. I’d put the former slaves on equal ground with their white neighbors, shaking hands and chatting it up like I’d do with any of my friends of color today. Wouldn’t readers get mad at me if I wrote the “n” word and portrayed racism in its hateful reality? What did I, a middle-class white woman in the 21st century, know about the struggle of black Americans to rise out of bondage to find their place in a free world that hated them? What right did I have to portray those ugly truths as they happened?

Then it clicked. What right did I have to NOT portray it accurately? Even a historical fiction novel must have a basis in truth for it to feel real. Perhaps the real reason I had avoided writing the negative was that it made me uncomfortable. I can’t feel guilty about slavery on a personal level because our generation cannot change the past. I don’t believe any of my ancestors ever owned slaves either, but I didn’t feel worthy to write it as it happened because I’ve never lived under the shadow of racism myself.

That’s when I decided to put the story aside until I had the skills, time, and courage to do it justice. In the fall of 2013, after I’d gotten three other books under my belt, I felt inspired to rewrite it for NaNoWriMo, a month-long writing marathon in the month of November. In 30 days, writers all over the world are challenged to write 50,000 words in a novel. I really doubted myself. For one, could I even accomplish that goal, and two, could I finally make this story into something I was proud of? I had gathered a lot of research, both from prior material and new, so I jumped into the fray.

By the end of November, I had 50,000 words and then some. I kept writing. By the end of winter, I had a 100,000 word manuscript. I spent spring of 2014 polishing it up. I didn’t “whitewash” anything. I portrayed the events as they would have likely played out. In the end, A Time for Everything included a heart-wrenching, timeless love story in the midst of a very tumultuous time in our nation’s history. The knitting together of our country’s frayed divisions wasn’t pretty. Blacks were by no means on equal ground with whites. They were still the victims of exploitation and violence. Veterans lost limbs and livelihoods and came home as prisoners to drug addiction. Desperate times led to desperate measures, and I didn’t pull the curtain over any of it.

To my relief, beta readers and others I polled for the most part agreed that I had done the right thing in my approach. To hide any of the ugly truths under a blanket of obliviousness wouldn’t be respectful to the memories of the men, women, and children who died for the dream of a united nation. And it wouldn’t honor those who still fight for that dream today.




Mysti Parker is a wife, mother, and shameless chocoholic. While her first love is romance, including five published books and an award-winning historical coming this summer, she enjoys writing flash fiction (the weirder the better) and children's stories. When she's not writing, Mysti works as a freelance editor, serves as a mentor in a 7-week writing course (F2K) and reviews books for SQ Mag, an online speculative fiction magazine. She resides in Buckner, KY with her husband, three children and too many pets.

You can find A Time for Everything at AmazonBarnes and NobleSmashwordsiTunes, and other ebook outlets.

         You can find Mysti on Facebook as well as her website, and on Twitter and Pinterest.


Posted by Mysti Parker 26 Aug 2015 at 01:49
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Imjustdru 26 Aug 2015 at 13:49  
I'll be the first to say you did the right thing. There are dark moments in history that we all should remember.
Mysticat 1 Sep 2015 at 01:42  
Thanks! I think so too. It's gotten a really good response so far.
Aryllia 6 Sep 2015 at 16:24  
They [African Americans] were still the victims of exploitation and violence. Veterans lost limbs and livelihoods and came home as prisoners to drug addiction.
So, from the view of someone who sees USA from news broadcasts and blog posts, it was exactly the same as it still is?
Mysticat 7 Sep 2015 at 21:23  
I wouldn't say exactly, since the Civil Rights movement changed history for the better, but yes, for many people of color and for our veterans, this scenario plays out time and time again.
Dystopianp 12 Sep 2015 at 20:05  
Are you sure about no white-washing? What if the problems come from the nouveau riche Irish and Scottish Catholics and the Mormons?

I am writing about Hawaii.

Visitors think the islands are all Aloha. The poor Hawaiians have acquired a "gim'me" or the "world owes me" attitude from the culture of poverty. The rich kids are bullies and snobs, ironically with low self worth except for their codes of dress and "stuff."

I am going to re-read Kaui Hemmings' first book and study how she white-washed without seeming to do so. She used three upper class Hawaiian teens and gave them all the negative attitudes and behaviors of the times. We watch the children grow out of their personal and social problems, issues that are the core of current Hawaii life.

I can't remember that she ever name-called or dissed the sources of these issues. Negative religious histories are totally avoided.

I am so glad you made me think about how to do this. Aloha, Marie
Mysticat 14 Sep 2015 at 23:37  
Thank you! I love to serve up some thinking fodder from time to time Social prejudices can be a delicate subject, but if you stay true to the facts, I think you're on the right track.

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